GRADE: A+
REMARKS: In general, the paper was very well-written. It was comprehensive yet concise, organized, and the arguments followed in a logical fashion with support from empirical findings. Sufficient background was provided in the introduction. In particular, it was a good move to delineate the parameters of PS for your paper. Your proposal to consider PS on a dimensional approach was quite persuasive and was tied in nicely to your previous discussion on the different conceptualizations of PS (i.e., addiction, ICD, OCD) and potential etiological factors. The consideration given to online shopping in the section on Future Directions was both thoughtful and realistic. Overall, a very commendable effort! Excellent work!
It's not just the good grades for the paper, it's also abt getting to know 3 awesome new frens from the grp, the happy times we spent tgt chionging the proj, YIH, Tumblr, facebook photos, SMU, MS's bday celebration, our fantastic Shopping Addiction presentation :X and XLBBB!!
So thankful to have taken this module and met them :)
*now back to reality of memorising HISTORY. I hate the sound of it :(
nice. :) thankyou you too. :)
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